15. Revise an Informational Essay

Students revise their informational essay in response to individualized feedback from their teacher

Recommendations for Instruction:

  1. Each student revises their no-provided-source essay in response to individualized teacher feedback.

  2. As students are working, teacher conferences with students to coach them on how to apply the individualized feedback across their essay.

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Writing to Inform - Informational Essay

Revise an Informational Essay

Directions: Read the feedback from your teacher and revise your essay. Then, write a few notes explaining the changes you made and how they address the feedback.


Explanation of Revisions:












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Answer Key and Teacher Resources

Answer Key

Student responses will vary depending on the feedback they've received.

Recommendations for Instruction:

  1. Each student revises their no-provided-source essay in response to individualized teacher feedback.

  2. As students are working, teacher conferences with students to coach them on how to apply the individualized feedback across their essay.